Kayar, the first paragraph should read:
The sun hung over the city of Lewë with a piercing gaze, glaring down at it from its zenith amongst the wash of the cold blue sky. No clouds accompanied it. Instead, it was the single break in an otherwise seamless sheet of azure. A bleak wind had arisen from the north and was sweeping across the city's heavily manned battlements, tugging at the helms of the wavering soldiers who stood, laden with dread and pent up apprehension, staring out over the earth in front of them. The line of soldiers ran the entire length of the battlements, which spanned over thousands of feet. Behind them sat rows of archers, awaiting the order to release a volley of arrows. Beyond this sat the city itself, a sprawling mass of mismatched stone and wood, and then a huge sheet of stone that signaled the beginning of the second tier of the city; and above that, jutting out over everything, was the triangular column of the citadel, a hulking mass of smooth grey stone.
Then there should be the start of a new indented paragraph. If this is not the case, then somehow you have got an outdated draft.
The promotion will end on sunday, so if you really want to support me that much then you can always delete and re-download on the Monday, I would certainly appreciate it. I have no reviews yet on the US store, so that would help greatly as well.
EDIT:
It should look like this:
http://postimage.org/image/66h7gmdln/